Krunal, patel
Eap 2 B
Writer’s Workshop
Summary response # 2
October 28, 2008 Problems with the condor
In Donna Bessken’s (2008) article “California condor population update summer 2008,” the author says California condors ‘s population increase on recent year and condors have problems with their lives. According to the article, California condors can fly 100 miles in one day for food. However, eating carrion and losing habitat are creating problems for their breeding and living. Also, recently California wildfires have collapsed condors’ population. Moreover, raising condors and releasing them into the forest has helped wild birds’ population.
Scientists should find effective cures to solve problems with wildfires. Carrion animals create problems and get lead poisoning. Condors play an essential role to maintain an eco system.
First, wildfires are creating lot of problems for forest animals. We can’t easily control wildfires. There are number of condors and animals that lost their house and life. Sometimes, it also creates problems around residents’ area. For example; once wildfires are exposed in Indian forest. Animals and birds lost their lives. The Indian government spent billions of money to prevent wildfires. Now, organizers are serious about wildfires. There are many fire stations and firemen around the forest. So, they can prevent wildfires.
Next, today lead poisoning is the big issue for California condor. California condors always eat carrion. It affects their health and breeding. Carrion animals are more poisonous than live. Condors feed these foods to their chicks. So, it might harmful for their ancestors. For example; according to the article, “leading poisoning as threat to California condor” the author(Ritter, 2008) says carrion animals create problems for California condor.
Finally, as we know, California condors play an essential role to maintaining an eco system. Big predators eat small prey. This cycle helps to sustain an environmental balance and eco system. Condors eat bugs and other small animals. For example; the sun gives energy to trees and plants. Animals, birds and bugs eat plants and trees. Some predators eat small prey. After that animals goes to land. Lack of an eco cycle creates problem for human beings.
In a nutshell, scientists and government can solve wildfire problems. Lead poisoning is affect of condors’ lives. California condors eat bugs and it helps to sustain eco cycle. So, if you want to maintain the eco system, preserve the birds(California condor).
References
Bessken, D. (2008,august 26). California condor population update
summer 2008.Retrived October 28, 2008, from http:// ezinearticles/?California-
condor-population-update-Summer-2008&id= 1442561
Ritter, J. (2008,October 24).lead poisoning eyed as threat to California condor. USA
Today. Retrieved October 22, 2008, from LexisNexis.
Thursday, October 30, 2008
Wednesday, October 29, 2008
BREATHE OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE FL # 3
krunal, patel
fluency # 3
Language Learning
Today, English is an international language. As we know, practice makes perfect. I think, no one can speak perfect English language. I would like to give some advice to people who are starting out to a learn English language. First, people should speak English. It it doesn't matter if they speak well or not. Second, people should watch English news channels. It really helps to improve English. Third, reading is the best way to learn the English language. I think, when we read something, at that time we know vocabulary. It also helps to improve our reading speed. If you want to learn for academic purposes then you should have a good teacher. The teacher plays an essential role because he gives guidance and knowledge about grammar. If you have no teacher and you just try at home, it doesn't work because you make mistakes but you think you are right.You can't improve your English. There are a number of differences between Indian English and American English. The most important method is reading English, speaking English, thinking English. Always try to improve English.
fluency # 3
Language Learning
Today, English is an international language. As we know, practice makes perfect. I think, no one can speak perfect English language. I would like to give some advice to people who are starting out to a learn English language. First, people should speak English. It it doesn't matter if they speak well or not. Second, people should watch English news channels. It really helps to improve English. Third, reading is the best way to learn the English language. I think, when we read something, at that time we know vocabulary. It also helps to improve our reading speed. If you want to learn for academic purposes then you should have a good teacher. The teacher plays an essential role because he gives guidance and knowledge about grammar. If you have no teacher and you just try at home, it doesn't work because you make mistakes but you think you are right.You can't improve your English. There are a number of differences between Indian English and American English. The most important method is reading English, speaking English, thinking English. Always try to improve English.
Monday, October 27, 2008
summary responce #1
KRUNAL, PATEL
EAP 2 B, WRITER’S WORKSHOP
SUMMARY AND RESPONSE # 2
OCTOBER 22, 2008
Human Kills California Condor
In John Ritter (2006) article “Lead poisoning Eyed As Threat T o California Condor,” the author says hunters use dangerous material that is harmful for California condor. According to article, organizers will establish laws, which are in favor of California condor. However, people who are fond of shooting they disagree with laws. Also, copper bullets would solve the problem but they are more expensive. Moreover, researchers also found that most of California condors are under risk. Therefore, lawmakers spend money to protect birds’ life.
I agree with author’s opinion that lawmakers established laws against sport foundation. California condor is farmers’ friends. However, California condor creates bad impression in our mind.
First, people hunt California condor just for hobbies the lives of the young. Some organizers organize shooting competition. But, they forget the valuation of birds. They also increase the number of people who join that kind of activity. Government establishes laws to protect California condor. For example; there are number of shooting sport foundations in India. They catch condors and other birds to organize shooting competitions. Suddenly, populations of birds collapsed in India. In the end, the Indian government established laws against shooting organizations.
Next, condor helps farmers. He is a predator of insects. Condor always prefers to live in green areas and farms. Condors play an essential role to maintain an ecosystem. Condor eats bugs in farms and it is really helpful for farmers. To some extant, condors save money and protect farmers’ crops. For example; my grandfather is a farmer. Whenever he grows plants, he irrigates his farm. At that time lots of condors come to my grandfather’s farm and eat bugs. My grandfather doesn’t need to use pesticides. It saves our money and time.
Finally, as we know, California condor is an omnivorous bird. It creates a bad impression in human life. We often see condors around dead animals. Condor is dirtier bird than other birds. He can’t adjust in our society. For example; in my village after animals die people throw them far away from the village. There are lots of condors who come around dead animals and eat with a very dirty style. It creates bad impression in our society. Sometimes, people are scared of condor’s eye.
In conclusion, shooting foundation is the worst way to get entertainment. California condor helps farmers and sustains eco system. Condor’s life styles encourage thinking about his negative characteristics.
Reference
Ritter, J. (2006, October 24). Lead poisoning eyed as threat to California condor. USA
Today. Retrieved October 22,2008. From lexis nexis.
EAP 2 B, WRITER’S WORKSHOP
SUMMARY AND RESPONSE # 2
OCTOBER 22, 2008
Human Kills California Condor
In John Ritter (2006) article “Lead poisoning Eyed As Threat T o California Condor,” the author says hunters use dangerous material that is harmful for California condor. According to article, organizers will establish laws, which are in favor of California condor. However, people who are fond of shooting they disagree with laws. Also, copper bullets would solve the problem but they are more expensive. Moreover, researchers also found that most of California condors are under risk. Therefore, lawmakers spend money to protect birds’ life.
I agree with author’s opinion that lawmakers established laws against sport foundation. California condor is farmers’ friends. However, California condor creates bad impression in our mind.
First, people hunt California condor just for hobbies the lives of the young. Some organizers organize shooting competition. But, they forget the valuation of birds. They also increase the number of people who join that kind of activity. Government establishes laws to protect California condor. For example; there are number of shooting sport foundations in India. They catch condors and other birds to organize shooting competitions. Suddenly, populations of birds collapsed in India. In the end, the Indian government established laws against shooting organizations.
Next, condor helps farmers. He is a predator of insects. Condor always prefers to live in green areas and farms. Condors play an essential role to maintain an ecosystem. Condor eats bugs in farms and it is really helpful for farmers. To some extant, condors save money and protect farmers’ crops. For example; my grandfather is a farmer. Whenever he grows plants, he irrigates his farm. At that time lots of condors come to my grandfather’s farm and eat bugs. My grandfather doesn’t need to use pesticides. It saves our money and time.
Finally, as we know, California condor is an omnivorous bird. It creates a bad impression in human life. We often see condors around dead animals. Condor is dirtier bird than other birds. He can’t adjust in our society. For example; in my village after animals die people throw them far away from the village. There are lots of condors who come around dead animals and eat with a very dirty style. It creates bad impression in our society. Sometimes, people are scared of condor’s eye.
In conclusion, shooting foundation is the worst way to get entertainment. California condor helps farmers and sustains eco system. Condor’s life styles encourage thinking about his negative characteristics.
Reference
Ritter, J. (2006, October 24). Lead poisoning eyed as threat to California condor. USA
Today. Retrieved October 22,2008. From lexis nexis.
Wednesday, October 22, 2008
FLUENCY #2
COMMUNICATION
Communication is another name of easy work. Today,there are lots of ways to communicate with friends. Cell phone is the best way to maintain relationships with friends. I believe friendship is the best home, which needs no roof. Cell phone is easy to keep with me. It is more affordable than laptop and computer. We can send text message by cell phone,if my friends can't receive the phone.In this circumstance, i can send text message or voice mail. Some compnies give free text messages. So,we can save our money. When i was in india,i always sent messages to my friends. I think, cell phone is give extra facilities such as internet, game, camera, etc.
Communication is another name of easy work. Today,there are lots of ways to communicate with friends. Cell phone is the best way to maintain relationships with friends. I believe friendship is the best home, which needs no roof. Cell phone is easy to keep with me. It is more affordable than laptop and computer. We can send text message by cell phone,if my friends can't receive the phone.In this circumstance, i can send text message or voice mail. Some compnies give free text messages. So,we can save our money. When i was in india,i always sent messages to my friends. I think, cell phone is give extra facilities such as internet, game, camera, etc.
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
true love story of KRUNAL HEENA
hi!i believe if you fall in love than you are world lukyest person. it doesn't matter you getting married with her/him.today,i am any thing just for my love. when i was 14 years old. i fall in love.she is my neighbor.can u believe that i still know every things about her. i don't know she loves me or not. but, i am crazy about her.whenever i am unsuccess about my love. i read spritual book, pray my god. and try to get my love.she know that i love him lot but i don't know what's problem.when i was 16 years old i promise her,after 5 years i will become something and i shaw you. and now i am in u.s.a.for student visa. before i was coming in u.s.a. i call her and i tell her i promise you one day i will becme successful person. and you offer me i wants to talk to you. at that time i refuse.in my life just one dream i want to become something and i will show her.last month i call her for talk but she refuse. whenever, i think about my past life at that time my passion is unbelievable. i want to achieve my goal any way. i am sure one day i saw her because my god with me. genarally,yougest are fail in the love at that time they smoke cigarette,drink bear,take drugs and sometimes suicide also.they lose their future. this is a really worst things. they should not do that.they should not lost their life for her/him love but they should take strenth and passion. and challege her/him one day i saw you. love change your life if you think right way otherwise you lose your life. i can't hate her because today i am any thing just for her.today,i am good person and my ambition just for her.if she is not come in my life than i am not in U.S.A.i can't do any thing. but, i really really love her so much. this love always going increase and increase. i have no any photo because i don't need. whenever i close my eye she comes frount of me. many times i am crying. i have just one option to get her and this is pray of god.in last 8 years, i never forget any any single moment about her. even i also know every dress which she wore.all moment is still in my eye. i think, people always say that good woman paly essential in successfull person this is my sad but true stoey of my life. i write down my web log name krunal heena. her name is HEENA.
practice summary responce
Krunal, patel
EAP2 B Writer’s workshop
Summary and Response # 1
October 17,2008
Global warning effect on animals
In the Tim Hirsch (2005) –BBC news article “Animals ‘hit by global warming'” the author says that animals have a lots of problems due to different weather conditions. According to in the article, researchers believe animals move from one place to another place frequently whenever they can’t find appropriate weather. Furthermore, animals have some common difficulty such as lacking of water, rising of sea level and melting of snow. However, scientists are trying to find effective cures that help animals. Moreover, we have to preserve natural resources because it can be helpful for animals.
I agree with the author’s opinion. Global warming directly affects animals’ life. Animals they’re always scared of humans. Also, we should stop doing experiments on animals.
First, global warming is the biggest problem in the world. Animals can’t find appropriate weather or place. Today, animals suffer lots of hazards such as deforestation, air pollution, dumped chemicals in the sea, etc.People cut down trees for their purposes and animals lose their home. For example; in India, people are dumping chemicals in the ocean. Sea animals are suffering diseases and dying.
Next, we should live in a world where animals don’t have to hide from humans. Animals always are scared of humans. People hunt animals for their purposes. Animals know that human is the big killer. We should preserve them. Whenever we appear, animals run somewhere. For example: my neighbor always bit a dog whenever he came around his house. Now, this dog never comes to my street.
Finally, as we know, scientists are always doing experiments on animals first before they launch. This is a really shameful thing for all human beings. A animal also has a soul. Experiments we do show that we are unaware of animals’ feelings and lives.
In conclusion, animals play an essential role in the cycle of the eco-systems. We should not kill animals for our own purpose. Scientist should do experiments whenever they are sure about the result. Next time, whenever we appear to animals, we shouldn’t bite them.
Reference
Hirsch, T.(2005, October 5). Animals 'hit by global warming’.BBC News. Retrieved October 10, 2008, from http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/4313726.stm
EAP2 B Writer’s workshop
Summary and Response # 1
October 17,2008
Global warning effect on animals
In the Tim Hirsch (2005) –BBC news article “Animals ‘hit by global warming'” the author says that animals have a lots of problems due to different weather conditions. According to in the article, researchers believe animals move from one place to another place frequently whenever they can’t find appropriate weather. Furthermore, animals have some common difficulty such as lacking of water, rising of sea level and melting of snow. However, scientists are trying to find effective cures that help animals. Moreover, we have to preserve natural resources because it can be helpful for animals.
I agree with the author’s opinion. Global warming directly affects animals’ life. Animals they’re always scared of humans. Also, we should stop doing experiments on animals.
First, global warming is the biggest problem in the world. Animals can’t find appropriate weather or place. Today, animals suffer lots of hazards such as deforestation, air pollution, dumped chemicals in the sea, etc.People cut down trees for their purposes and animals lose their home. For example; in India, people are dumping chemicals in the ocean. Sea animals are suffering diseases and dying.
Next, we should live in a world where animals don’t have to hide from humans. Animals always are scared of humans. People hunt animals for their purposes. Animals know that human is the big killer. We should preserve them. Whenever we appear, animals run somewhere. For example: my neighbor always bit a dog whenever he came around his house. Now, this dog never comes to my street.
Finally, as we know, scientists are always doing experiments on animals first before they launch. This is a really shameful thing for all human beings. A animal also has a soul. Experiments we do show that we are unaware of animals’ feelings and lives.
In conclusion, animals play an essential role in the cycle of the eco-systems. We should not kill animals for our own purpose. Scientist should do experiments whenever they are sure about the result. Next time, whenever we appear to animals, we shouldn’t bite them.
Reference
Hirsch, T.(2005, October 5). Animals 'hit by global warming’.BBC News. Retrieved October 10, 2008, from http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/4313726.stm
take care animals
Krunal, patel
EAP2 B Writer’s workshop
Summary and Response # 1
October 17,2008
Global warning effect on animals
In the TIM Hirsch (2005) –BBC news article “Animals ‘hit by global warming” the author says that animals have a lots of problems due to different weather conditions. According to in the article, researchers believe animals move from one place to another place frequently whenever they can’t find appropriate weather. Furthermore, animals have some common difficulty such as lacking of water, rising of sea level and melting of snow. However, scientists are trying to find effective cures that help animals. Moreover, we have to preserve natural resources because it can be helpful for animals.
I agree with the author’s opinion. Global warming directly affects animals’ life. animals they’re always scared of humans. Also, we should stop doing experiments on animals.
First, global warming is the biggest problem in the world. Animals can’t find appropriate weather or place. Today, animals suffer lots of hazards such as deforestation, air pollution, dumped chemicals in the sea, etc. people cut down trees for their purposes and animals lose their home. For example; in India, people are dumping chemicals in the ocean. Sea animals are suffering diseases and dying.
Next, we should live in a world where animals don’t have to hide from humans. Animals always scared of humans. People hunt animals for their purposes. Animals know that human is the big killer. We should preserve them. Whenever, we appear, animals run somewhere. For example; my neighbor always bit a dog whenever he came around his house. Now, this dog never comes to my street.
Finally, as we know, scientists are always doing experiments on animals first before they launch. This is a really shameful thing for all human beings. A animals also has soul. Experiments we do show that we are unaware of animals’ feelings and lives.
In conclusion, animals play an essential role in the cycle of the eco-systems. We should not kill animals for our own purpose. Scientist should do experiments whenever they are sure about result. Next time, whenever we appear to animals, we shouldn’t bit them.
Reference
Hirsch, T.(2005, October 5). Animals ’hit by global warming’ retrieved October 10, 2008, from http;//news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/4313726.stm
EAP2 B Writer’s workshop
Summary and Response # 1
October 17,2008
Global warning effect on animals
In the TIM Hirsch (2005) –BBC news article “Animals ‘hit by global warming” the author says that animals have a lots of problems due to different weather conditions. According to in the article, researchers believe animals move from one place to another place frequently whenever they can’t find appropriate weather. Furthermore, animals have some common difficulty such as lacking of water, rising of sea level and melting of snow. However, scientists are trying to find effective cures that help animals. Moreover, we have to preserve natural resources because it can be helpful for animals.
I agree with the author’s opinion. Global warming directly affects animals’ life. animals they’re always scared of humans. Also, we should stop doing experiments on animals.
First, global warming is the biggest problem in the world. Animals can’t find appropriate weather or place. Today, animals suffer lots of hazards such as deforestation, air pollution, dumped chemicals in the sea, etc. people cut down trees for their purposes and animals lose their home. For example; in India, people are dumping chemicals in the ocean. Sea animals are suffering diseases and dying.
Next, we should live in a world where animals don’t have to hide from humans. Animals always scared of humans. People hunt animals for their purposes. Animals know that human is the big killer. We should preserve them. Whenever, we appear, animals run somewhere. For example; my neighbor always bit a dog whenever he came around his house. Now, this dog never comes to my street.
Finally, as we know, scientists are always doing experiments on animals first before they launch. This is a really shameful thing for all human beings. A animals also has soul. Experiments we do show that we are unaware of animals’ feelings and lives.
In conclusion, animals play an essential role in the cycle of the eco-systems. We should not kill animals for our own purpose. Scientist should do experiments whenever they are sure about result. Next time, whenever we appear to animals, we shouldn’t bit them.
Reference
Hirsch, T.(2005, October 5). Animals ’hit by global warming’ retrieved October 10, 2008, from http;//news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/4313726.stm
Monday, October 20, 2008
life is complex fluencuy # 1
krunalkumar said...
hi! first and foremost thing, i am a world top boring person but i am happy with my life.i always thinking about future life.i surf internet.i read many interesting things about successful person. i read about bill gets, mahattma gandhi and others.i want to know,how can they become successful person in the world. my goal is to big and i want to achieve my goal in any cost.i met some indian people. i call my friends and family.i miss my past life.i pray my god. i observe one things in my life is that if my god with me than i can do any things. CESL is good place to improve english.but CESL fees is to expensive.i miss all CESL teachers and activities also.
hi! first and foremost thing, i am a world top boring person but i am happy with my life.i always thinking about future life.i surf internet.i read many interesting things about successful person. i read about bill gets, mahattma gandhi and others.i want to know,how can they become successful person in the world. my goal is to big and i want to achieve my goal in any cost.i met some indian people. i call my friends and family.i miss my past life.i pray my god. i observe one things in my life is that if my god with me than i can do any things. CESL is good place to improve english.but CESL fees is to expensive.i miss all CESL teachers and activities also.
Thursday, October 16, 2008
college life
I think college life is a golden life. I have completed my graduation in B. Sc (chemistry). I can easily find friends in my home college. I can understand them. My college is smaller than SIUC. I don't have any communication problem with them. The college campus plays an essential role in my life. I always meet my friends on campus. At the end of the year, we celebrate "college days". This means we have singing competition,teacher day, dance party day, drama competition etc. We participated in a drama competition when i was in the third year of college. We got first prize. It was really a memorable moment in my life. My college professors are very friendly by nature and always ready to help students. Whenever i have any practical difficulty about chemistry, at that time they helped me. In SIUC, i can't find friends.
Wednesday, October 1, 2008
piller of life,school education
Hi!school life is golden life.i believe that school is a temple of education and teacher is god of temple.teachers gives me basic knowledege about language and maths. my school is one of the best school in my city.it was establised in 1985.my school is smaller than siu. my school has a three floor and 134 classroom.in my school has good library facility.it was fully built by constraction works. while, in the U.S.A. every things built by woods and glasses.in india,uniform plays essential role in school life.i think,it is identity of our school.generally,school semester starts on june.we don't need to switch class after finish one class.teacher comes in our class.when i was in elemetary school, at that time our class is build by roof.first and foremost,we call teachers with respect like, sir or mame.while,in U.S.A.students call teachers with first name or family name.i like one things in the U.S.A, teachers are always ready to help students.while,in india, some teachers can't understand students problems.sometimes,teachers didn't give answer our questions.in U.S.A. education system is better and easy than my contry.in india,there are a number of world famous institutes availble likes, IIM INSTITUTE,NIRAMA INSTITUTE etc. i like CESL,i think,it is really helpful in my life.CESL is best way to improve our english.
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